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The moonlight whispers through silvered leaves, casting shadows that dance and weave. My spirit floats beyond earthly bounds, where gentle dreams make no sounds. Nature's breath flows soft and deep, in realms where ancient secrets keep.
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A Silent Danger
The children of this generation, lost in their screens,
Every day, every hour—trapped in digital dreams.
A phone in their hands, yet they feel so alone,
Drifting in cyberspace, far from home.
They wish to shine, like the bright full moon,
Yet shun the hard work—life's lessons come soon.
Addicted to pixels, they fail to see,
The silent danger of this captivity.
They know the truth, they feel the weight,
Yet hesitate to change their fate.
Will they wake up, break free, move on?
Or stay lost before salvation's gone?
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